Front page- pulse nominations on left takes up a lot of room- could you use a shape to put writing in?
Contents- look at the alignment of text in middle section
Double page- make sure all text is easy to read, especially pull quote
Thank you for the feedback. I plan on reducing the amount of sell lines on the left to follow through with the R&B appearance that I am aiming for. In the next draft, I will ensure that there is more consistency in my fonts to reduce confusion for the audience and over crowding.
Thank you for the feedback. I plan on reducing the amount of sell lines on the left to follow through with the R&B appearance that I am aiming for. In the next draft, I will ensure that there is more consistency in my fonts to reduce confusion for the audience and over crowding.
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